“Spreading your wings in a perplexing world”
December, 2016 James Hurd
- New blog article: The Game My Mother Taught Me
- Writer’s Corner
- Book and Film reviews
- E-zine subscription information
- How to purchase Wingspread: Of Faith and Flying
- Quotable quotes
New blog article: “The Game My Mother Taught Me”
“Mom, I’m bored. What can I do?”
The clock nibbles away at the afternoon. It’s Sunday and I’m a fidgety ten-year-old sitting on our living room couch. We Fundamentalists embrace a strict set of biblical doctrines, and a list of forbidden “worldly” practices—practices especially prohibited on Sundays. I can’t go to the movies or read the newspaper. Can’t ride my bike out of the neighborhood…. Read more here: https://jimhurd.com/2016/12/05/the-game-my-mother-taught-me/
Writer of the Month: Henri M. Nouwen (1992-1996). Dutch priest. Powerful devotional writing that shows great transparency and vulnerability. Read by millions of Catholics and Protestants alike. Books: The Return of the Prodigal Son, The Wounded Healer, In the Name of Jesus, Genesee Diary).
Words of the Month
Scening: Think motion pictures. A “scene” is a place where an un-interrupted series of actions takes place. Temporarily label each scene in your manuscript and make sure you’re signaling to the reader where she is in the story. This also helps you keep chronology and transitions straight.
Tagging: Temporarily use colored print to reveal the anatomy of your manuscript.
Normal print for narrative, story. Should be over half your piece. It’s what engages the reader.
Green for reflections about the narrative, and descriptions of people, places, etc. Limit this.
Orange for dialogue. Use lots of this.
Grey for “backstory”—explanations of the story; previous happenings—eliminate this, limit this, or feed it to your reader in small bits and pieces.
Answers to quiz for November
- Before I realized it, I had driven much further into the desert. (Use “farther” for distance)
- He noticed a large stain in the rug that was right in the center of the room. (Stain or rug was in the center?)
- The dog aggravated the little puppy. (Irritated. “Aggravate” means to make worse)
- He had shone how not to fly the airplane. (Shown. “Shone” is past tense of “shine”)
New Quiz for December. Correct these sentences:
- You should vote, irregardless of your political preferences.
- Today they have less workers than formerly.
- Caribou smells good like a coffee shop should.
Writer’s tip of the Month: Use descriptions (of places, people, things, weather) but limit them to a few essential details, and tell your reader only what they need to know.
Book and Film Reviews
Foreign Correspondent. 1940. An early Alfred Hitchcock film. American triumphalism. (three stars)
This Changed Everything. 2016. A video documentary on the 500th anniversary of the Protestant Reformation (2017). Excellent, three-program set, narrated by David Suchet.
George Herbert (1593-1633), The Complete English Poems. Penguin Press: 2004. Great, insightful clergyman with a magic pen. (four stars)
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♠ Both optimists and pessimists contribute to aviation. The optimist invents the airplane; the pessimist, the parachute.
♠ Aviation training: Death is just nature’s way of telling you to watch your airspeed.
♠ Venison for dinner again? Oh deer!
♠ England has no kidney bank, but it does have a Liverpool.
♠ They told me I had type-A blood, but it was a typo.
♠ I changed my iPod’s name to Titanic. It’s syncing now.
♠ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went, and then it dawned on me.
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Absence of occupation is not rest.
A mind quite vacant is a mind distress’d.
Time’s clock hurls us all on a one-way life ticket, and when you reach retirement, you can’t rewind. You find yourself still busy, but different busy.
Your employer no longer tells you what to do. But your partner—loving and kind—brims with fresh ideas to fill your days, and believes that now that you’ve retired, you should be working on becoming a Better Person. This apparently includes such things as exercising, controlling your weight, maturing spiritually, spending more time with the grandkids, and significantly, taking a greater role in kitchen and housework.
From our first date, Barbara and I never talked about division of labors, so on our honeymoon I began to prepare breakfast. She had a few kind suggestions, and then took charge of food preparation for the next forty years. She didn’t exactly forbid me to cook, but she arrived in my house with a sturdy image of her calling, a calling that included all the cooking, housework, and most of the child rearing. At first, I limited my domestic tasks to repairing our car, mowing the lawn, and handling our money. (She would say I earned it and she spent it.) Gradually, my responsibilities expanded to taking out the trash and, if I got up last, making the bed—the only incentive I can think of to get up early.
Now that we’re retired I occasionally offer to grocery shop, but apparently I lack the requisite skills—judgment, frugality and—okay—common sense. The supermarket presents itself to me as a foreign country—inscrutably organized, with nothing arranged logically, nothing in plain view. I’m too proud to ask for help because I know what people will think—He’s clueless! Even the rare times I go with Barbara, I serve mainly to challenge and distract.
When I offer, “Give me your list; I’ll buy the stuff,” she replies, “That’s all right. You’d take twice as long and pay too much for stuff we don’t need.” It’s true—I’m never sure what brand or size to buy, whether I want lite, diet, or regular, whether I should get high-fiber, organic, or low-fat. I don’t understand coupons. I eschew green-colored food displays; my tastes run more to the ice cream, meat, and cheese counters and to things like refried beans, potato chips, pastries, and chocolate. I’m heartened to hear that with all its antioxidants, chocolate’s becoming the new broccoli. I’ve always thought that if your body craves something, that means it’s good for you. It’s not that I despise the food groups; I just choose to honor different ones than Barbara.
Retirement changes your work habits. Shortly after I retired, I tried the old line, “I have to go to the office.” But when Barbara would ask, “What for?” I couldn’t think of anything. So, when we moved into our townhome, I plunged into unboxing and assembling new furniture, installing cupboards and curtain rods, hanging pictures, spackling and painting walls, installing TV, stereo, carbon monoxide detector and smoke alarms, and repairing downspouts.
Today, Barbara passes her days keenly alert for any strange noise—a sticky door, a flickering lightbulb, a bare spot on the wall. I don’t repair any of these anomalies too quickly, because they’re like moving ducks in a shooting gallery—you no more knock one off than another one appears.
One day Barbara notices that our dishwasher heats and whirs but doesn’t swish any water over the dishes. She says, “The dishes come out as dirty as when you put them in.”
I tell her, “I think that’s the way it’s supposed to work. Anyway, they’re sterilized.”
So of course we purchase a new Whirlpool with an Energy Star rating. Like a dried-out drunk, I immediately start criticizing friends who don’t have Energy Star-rated appliances. Don’t they care about being green? But when I discover that friends who are real greenies wash dishes by hand, I graciously forgive all my dirty-energy friends.
I think Barbara invites guests over only as an excuse to clean the whole house. I’ve never personally seen any dust in the house, yet Barbara insists that we should clean on the grounds that there might be some there. She’s introduced me to the vacuum cleaner, a challenging machine with lots of switches and levers. It waits patiently in the closet and whispers, “Please take me out; I feel neglected.”
When I first pulled the vacuum out and grasped the cold metal handle, it seemed simple enough, and surrendered to my control. I determined to do the sunroom first, because it’s small, and doesn’t seem very dirty. I pushed and pushed with little result. “Barbara, it doesn’t seem to be cleaning very well.”
“You have to push the brush control down.”
“I knew that.”
“No, you didn’t.”
Now an expert, I thrill to the loud, businesslike whirr of the motor, the smell of dust in the air, the light-colored swipes on the carpet. The whole house takes less than an hour, yet I wonder darkly, Is this merely the thin edge of a dangerous wedge?
It’s true—without even realizing it, I find myself immersed in other new tasks—for instance, scrubbing the kitchen floor using a milky liquid that Barbara tells me you merely wipe on and wipe off. This is cleanliness gone to church—the floor doesn’t even seem dirty. I learn that you should sweep first. Otherwise you’re down on your hands and knees with a cleaning rag, chasing around little crud thingies.
I’m not complaining—I love retirement. I want to end my passage well. I wish to work well, seeking those new tasks God has for me. It’s just that I didn’t realize God was so interested in cleaning and vacuuming.
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New article: Here’s an article about Barbara’s Mennonite childhood on the farm.
A footbridge high above Pequea Creek provided a shortcut to Uncle John’s farm. We also used that bridge to go visit our grandparents who lived with Uncle John. Narrow boards hung on two cables, with two more cables for handgrips, but no sides. (Read more…)
Writer’s Corner: Wondering how to clean up your writing? Read my short piece, “How to revise an article” at: https://jimhurd.com/2014/12/05/ezine-for-dec-15-2014/
Some Favorite quotes:
♠ ‘Twas much that man was made like God before, but that God should be made like man, much more. Milton
♠ In theory, there’s a difference between theory and practice. But in practice, there’s not.
♠ Of all my wife’s relatives, I like myself the best.
♠ Wife to husband: “But I thought that after you retired, you’d work more on becoming a better person…” (Oh oh…)
♠ People need to know that you care before they care what you know. James F. Hind
Helpful writers’ links:
All about self-publishing: http://online-book-publishing-review.toptenreviews.com/
Great link for self-publishing, writing contests, writing tips for authors. This is where I published the Wingspread book. http://www.writersweekly.com/
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Busyness is the earwax against the voice of God.
Bitterness is a poison that you take, hoping that the other person will die.
Pride has two evil stepsisters— low self-esteem and jealousy—and two cousins, anger and bitterness.
In theory, there’s no difference between theory and practice, but in practice, there is.
I’m a Christ-follower, but I suck at it. (Fuller Seminary student)
Wondering how to clean up your writing? Read my “How to revise an article” at: https://jimhurd.com/category/writing/ It contains gleanings from the experts.
“The Middle Passage” A story about middle school and coming of age—read it at: https://jimhurd.com/2014/11/06/the-middle-passage/
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Wingspread: A new Ezine dedicated to faith, flying, and coming of age in a complex world.
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